Wednesday 30 May 2012

The Resilience by Scott Jones





Machine guns firing, the bullets are coming.

Bang! Bang! Bang! The noise is stunning!
The men storm on through all the terror,
Until a bomb goes off - an enormous tremor.

Bloodshot eyes; tired, tired men.
"Keep going, boys! It’s almost the end."
The war is over, the combat finally done,
The blood trickles into the ocean, under a blazing sun.

The way this poem has a bit of a performance style is that it has repetition in the words ‘Bang! Bang! Bang!’ and ‘tired, tired men.’  It also suggests sounds with ‘Machine guns firing’ and ‘A bomb goes off - an enormous tremor'.  The colour I chose to use in the poem is red as it is seen in  'bloodshot eyes' and the blood of the soldiers.



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